Reviews for Forgiving
3M2R chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Descriptive poem. It's simple and to the point.

It's a little plain though, mainly because it's a descriptive poem. Not surprising that it would lack some vivace in it.

Fav line:

'Our sins pile up as time goes by.'

You've good rhyme too. Not constricting the poem in any way.