wow love this it would be good as a long term story like shed gets preg or her mum stops her from seeing him or shes half were wolf

FWA that was so cute 3 LUUVD it!

So cute! I wish I could read more of this!

It felt like Rowan gave in too soon. Nevertheless, I like the story. I really hope you'll write a sequel.

Thanks!

No Kresley Cole inspiration? :'D
I kid. (Though if you haven't read her IAD series, you're missing out!)
But seriously, I really liked your story. Thank you!

I like the feeling put into the words, the story has a good flow, and I would love to see more, see how you develop the characters. I think this story has great potential.

Thank you for posting your story. It's not really my kind of thing, because your heroine is too young, too immature. It reads a bit like a teenage fantasy of a first time. So, as a fantasy, it has it's merrits. As a story, it has a lot of...potential. Your characters could use a bit of depth. Why doesn't Rowan pester her wolf with questions? Where is the mother she loves to be afraid of? Also, I cant really respect a heroine, who is so lust crazed, that she follows a strange wolf/man to a lonely place in the woods and forgets to talk about condoms. All fantasy needs a healthy dose of reality, something people can relate to. I can't relate. Sorry.

that was good but she gave herself up really easily.

haha, sorry for not commenting. I thought I had done it already!

Anyway, I love it so much! During part 4, i loved when you described her own thought and ideas while the whole scene was taking place instead of just stating what was physically happening. You included a lot of details, so the reader never had to question what was happening. I really liked it. I hope you continue writing stories like these.

You should do his story. Like how he found her and everthing. I really loved this story! :)

AWESOME!

I really enjoyed this story. Not to fast and not cheesy or stupid at all. Very hot! Nice job. Thank you.

Nice but mostly concentrating on the girl's point of view. For the chemistry to be explained properly it might be good to have the guy's point of view as well.

Wow...very steamy. xD

I've read the first three parts and am really liking this story! It has a quick pace, but not too quick...there is still anticipation building. I got to the 4th part and now I have to stop because I know I can't finish before I leave work. (yes I'm reading at work...my guilty pleasure sometimes). I will be reading the rest tonight for sure.

You have great talent at scene setting. The descriptions practically paint a picture in my head for me...I don't have to imagine the place on my own. Love that.

I hope you continue to write, I'd be sure to read it!