Reviews for Drawn by the Forest
daydrmr chapter 4 . 11/11/2010
ok, so you want a review?

Loved, loved, loved the story! And just so you know, I believe if you decided to continue, it would be an amazing story!

Also, you wanted to know about 'any mistakes.' Well there was was a teeny tiny error in part 3 where you used the word feeling-I think it would have sounded better if there was an s tacked on the end. I can't tell you exactly where it was, just that in the sentence which it was used-it was the 2nd or 3rd word.

There was also a misuse of a word in the middle of part 4. You used the word 'wine' and it should have been the word 'whine'. Again, not exactly a 'biggie' in the grammatical dept., but you did say that you wanted to know.

I'll be lokking forward to more writing from you in the future.
Twitdit chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
"If you think of 'lemons' and associate it with fruit that grows on trees, then you shouldn't read this..." Hahaha that made me laugh out loud :) This story was awesome. You should definitely continue :D
daydrmr chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Um...Wow! Nice work with the scene description! I could almost see the fall foliage, the clearing and the pond/lake. Hope to see an update soon. I'd like to see where you take this.
Alkedema chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Good first chapter, you got me interested in the story. its hard to critque a story based only on one chapter so i have nothing bad to say :-) there were some grammer mistakes but it didnt bother me.

I cant wait for the next chapter!
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