This is interesting. But I'm wondering why Mark doesn't have any actual insight on the subject; you'd think he would. But I guess I'll have to continue reading, perhaps?

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This is just a really good story and it's more unique than everything I've ever read...well, it's up there, at least (: Definatly top for fictions here. (:

So interested and great job!

You know what I think? They should learn to turn phones on silent (:

This is a very, very good story and it has such a good plot line that is unique and makes me want to know more. I'm so excited to keep on reading! The writing itself has it's own style to it but you are, almost always because there's never perfection, able to keep everything grammatically correct. Sometimes I find that writers who have there own style have very bad grammar so props to you!

Onto the next chapter! (:

I'm surprised this story hasn't gotten more than one review yet. It's very good.

Your writing style and flow are very smooth, and your grammar is perfect, so that already makes it pleasant to read. The plot's intriguing- so far I've only read the first chapter, but if this was a book in a bookstore, I'd probably pick it up and buy it, because it's very thought-through. Nice job with this.

~aCheckeredPoe

Wow...this story is a great combination of an excellent plot and great writing. I'm excited to see where it goes.