Reviews for Disappear
aby pwn u chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Aw...Thats was sweet :) How are so good with poetry I TOTALLY need help ! Really Really hard for me but urs flows but mine is all choppy! :S help?
YasuRan chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
As usual, you have a great rhyming scheme. Everything flows well and I can get a clear picture of the emotion portrayed. It shows enough for the reader to understand but not too much as to not leave them curious. Great job!