Reviews for Sweets
Humanit-E chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Very cute poem! It was very...sweet! Honestly, who doesn't like sweets? Well done!

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JoyHeart chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
A bit awkward and lacking flow for poetry, but if you wrote this when you were young I would say it's very cute.