I really dislike Quin. He's more than a bit of a smug jerk. I also think Jason could do better. Quin can't even tell his parents he's gay but here sure loves pushing Jason past his comfort level. The story started interesting but I'll probably not even finish it.

that was such a great story, thanks for writing it and you're amazing!

Aww I read this story in 2011 it was amazing I thought I had review it was so cool and this chapter make me laugh a lot everytime I read fantastic and Quin oh my he is wonderful,I laugh at his is so adorable,I would to read the sequal you are writing.

Mo, I am currently writing a story that is a complementary story to this one called, Play on Words. It's a sort of prequel and although the main characters from this one aren't in it, there is one character from this one that appears in that one. I also have plans for a short sequel that link both stories together. I am still quite active on this site, and don't plan on just forgetting about it. You can count on that. ;)

I had to reread it, it was so good. It doesn't seem as you guys are on this site anymore, but if you are would you consider writing a sequel? Please?

Oh my god. That was the best novel/story (long enough to be a novel!) I've read in a long time! I had to stay up until I could finish it... But I can't fall back asleep now because I can't stop thinking about this.

Ah, that story was greaat. You know it amazes me hkw really religious people wanna condem you to hell hoe being gay and wanna qoute the bible and all, but they seem to forget about thecone telling them not to judge. Ugh. Anywhoooo. I lived it. I gotta admit I have messed with the missionaries too. Lol. It was a geat read. Though I feel kinda lost not knowing anymore aabout how his relationship with his brother turned out. I just hiped he was brained washed liked they tried to do Jason.

Haha, it was really good :D You could totally write some sort of spin-off with the Brothers as main characters. Totally. Anyway, I'm finishing this at 5 in the morning, so it's probably that good an idea. Wasn't expecting this, it's really good

I loved this story it had just the right amound of humor and anger in all good stories you have to have both.

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AWWWWW YEAHHH! THEY TIED THE KNOT! YESSS! THEY'RE SO CUTE AND SEXY! Really great job! I really quite enjoyed the whole thing. Quin is simply fantastic, and Jason is just too cute! They make such a great couple! The whole fiasco with Jason's parents was so nerve wracking to read! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! I actually thought for a moment that Jason might end up punching his father and having everything turn into a brawl; I wouldn't have been surprised. The conflict was written quite well. Well done!

I agree with you on this one. While it's true that the game explanation was quite long and didn't do much for the development of the other characters, I think since, like you said, it's Jason's first videogame, he would be paying more attention to it than the others. I also think it's a really good way of developing Jason's character; the choices he makes in the game are interesting and give a peek into his personality and social instincts.

I'm really enjoying this story, btw! It's quite good!

I enjoyed the story very much and hope to read more of your stories in the future. Jason and Quin were just perfect for each other and their interaction was funny and cute. The last chapter made a great conclusion to the story. Jason's parents were total bastards and I can't understand how people can be that fanatical about religion.

Yeah, this was really a nice story with a nice happy ending. Write more!

It's a sweet story. I could have done without some of the side trips and some of the monologues...or rather I'd have liked them to have more of a purpose. But generally I really liked the story. Quin and Jason are sweet together, and the passion was really good! Thanks for sharing.

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