great story! i love how jason observes and experiences everything.

is that a real bl game? or did you just make it up?

ahaha this is awesome! :D

seriously keep up the great work!

Loved it :) you were great at portraying Jason's parents and I know someone with parents close to that and it was really similar so great job!

I generally don't comment but this story was wonderful, no faults that need amending but I hope you mean it's a Claimer not Disclaimer :)

Beautiful story, I love the characters and how it all came together at the end. Nice touch with the church getting in contact!

Quin and Jason are adorable.

I absolutely loved this story! The final chapter was just too funny as well

Excellent story, I loved it! D

Aww, loved it. Loved the entire fic, actually! Amazing job and I eagerly look forward to seeing more fiction from you!

naww hahah i totally loved this story! it was amazing! :D your so awesome :P

NO! NO NO NO NO NO! :'( It's over? Really? *Sniff sniff* But I liked it so much! And I usually don't like boy on boy! You did GREAT! And he found a name worse than kid! I love it. :) Great, awesome, and as far as writing in general your descriptions were amazing and you have a nice writing style. Keep it up!

Great story! :D

Ok, so I usually don't like this type of story but this is just TOO funny and sweet. (And though it is rated M, it is not OVERLY so and it has a plot.) So I am happy. :) It is lovely!

Nice story. I had a god laugh with the coisin and brother and some of our main's couple's antics and then some of the scenes were cute and some others were downright hot. I really enjoyed reading your story.

If I may, two things bothered me a little while reading and I thought I'd share them with you (on one of those you actually asked for opinions so I'll give mine). First, it did seem bizarre when Jason was re-telling the scenario of the game instead of what was going on around, I would expect him to feel more self-conscious about playing that game (and finding it strange, if he's never played video games before surely all he's heard about are how those shot-them-all games make people go crazy and shot people in the streets or some such nonsense, a dating game should be more puzzling to someone so sheltered). Then the whole explanation to the parent was a little bit too… too much like reading a story. There was too much information, it almost felt rehearsed. That and maybe the two of them were a little bit too outspoken about their feelings (in my opinion, I don't know many people who would just get it all out like that without feeling self-conscious about it but I might just hang with a shy crowd).

I lol at the missionaries. They remind me of traditional mormons. (I hope someone has a problem with this review so I can lol more)

FAREWELL DEAR STORY OF JOY AND MAGIC. D: I shall miss you.

So CUTE!

I really enjoyed this story and how all your characters grew and developed and how the plot thickened not too fast and not too slow -

It's definitely a story that you make you feel fluffy inside and all warm on cosy- especially on a cold day ;P

I'm so sad it's over ;_; but, it was a good ending and it's good you didn't trail off and lose the plot.

Thank you very much ;P

[me thinks I will recommend this on The_Slash_Pile community on livejournal ;P]