Reviews for Forevermore
inactive2395 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Excellent. I adore poems like this. This is deffinatly one of the better poems i've read so far. Though... i do admit i havent read to many yet. lolz. I love how it was repetitive at the end but different each time. Great job, and please keep writing if your this good!
salt pillar chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
This is a great poem.

I love the imagery, I love the language.

I couldn't find anything wrong with it.

My favorite line would probably be "Headless dolls and vanished playmates." Kind of reminds me of those horror stories with the creepy children... yeah. Never mind.