Reviews for My reaction to bloodstained paradise
lymli chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
you're right, sometimes all the emotions from war can't be said on letters.
Lyra Kaji chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Great clincher! This poem really leaves you thinking. I really like the cadence of the poem, too. It's kind of like the stichomythic dialogue (I'm not sure how to spell that) used by Homer and Socrates and the Greeks in general; it's very effective and natural-sounding, with some very effective thesis-counterthesis and parallel phrasing stuff. I like the rhetorical questions, too. I was going to write a response poem, but it started to sound exactly like Bloodstained Paradise, so I guess I won't do that after all... Thanks for taking the time to write a whole poem in response to mine...it makes me feel really...inspirational.
raptoregg64 chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
It really makes you think. And the wording was beautiful- you did a great job with this. :)
St. Valentine chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Although short and sweet, this was beautiful. Bravo.