Oh Good mongoose...This is kinda messed up I mean Reggie just watched it all like honestly... Todd's a idiot for loving Reggie after he let all that happen to him...

Don't let Todd die

I adore that you've updated adn with a chapter that, again, is so powerful and emotional; but this cliffhanger is agonizing! Please update the next chapter soon!

This story is so raw and it has a sense of reality to it. Reggie is a bastard and Todd is too forgiving and niave. I like Todd but he is going to get killed on Reggie's watch because Reggie will not stand up to his friends and Todd will continue to be understanding about the fact which is even sicker. Now in Reggie's defense, if you can call it that, I think he does have feelings for Todd - love, I don't know. Although, I know you can love the one you hurt. This case seems like a domestic issue, but Todd is not being abused by Reggie, but by his friends.

The things people do to keep their reputation. Just because someone is different whether it is their sexual orientation, race, or tons of other differences, some people just cannot deal with the implications of being an outcast even if it is for the person they claim to love. That is sad, but it's life and happens all the time. Reggie does not deserve Todd at all. One minute Reggie is hot and the next he is cold toward Todd. Again, I know he is trying to save face with his peers, but he should have thought of that before he developed feelings for Todd. Todd has placed his life in Reggie's hands whether Reggie like it or not. Todd may have been oblivious to it, but he did none the less. Todd has given all the power to Reggie and even feels guilty for causing him trouble. Wow!

Until Todd stands up for himself, it is only going to get worse. I can picture it now, Todd getting beat up again and possibly to death while Reggie stands and looks off cowardly and then makes up some excuse to the others to spare Todd's life. Love is a very strong emotion and some people take loads of crap in the name of love, but hopefully Todd will realize that he should love himself more than anybody else and more than Reggie and begin to heal is little broken soul. If Reggie is truly in love with Todd, he needs to feel what it is like without Todd. Great update!

Oh my god. I hate you... In a good type of way, ya know?

How could you leave it like that! Ah!

Update. Now.

Can't wait.

-Anna-

Another wonderful chapter. I loved it.

I love this chapter. I know what it's like to make a huge mistake and try so very hard to fix it. It's a really hard thing to do.

This story is amazing in every way. You're an extremely talented writer so I'm glad I stuck with you throughout this journey of yours. (:

I'm patiently awaiting the next chapter.

-Anna-

what? just like that all is forgiven? no.. i like that son of a bitch reggie to suffer pls. let all of them suffer.. seriously the poor boy god, i cried reading this ... pls. continue updating..keep up the god work and i love todd

oh my god is it gonna be tragedy?why do i have feeling that todd is gonna die? reading this gave me a bad feeling like some kind of dread...

I love this story, keep going c:

Well, I've enjoyed what I've read so far :)

I wonder where this I'd going to lead, like; Todd going to hospital, how the rape will affect him, how it'll affect his relelationship with Reggie, what'll happen with Jimmy and everyone else.

I can't wait until the next update, keep it up.

Though I must say that it feels a little odd that Reggie is keeping Todd at his house and not even thinking about taking him to the hospital, because well, he kinda needs to go. I mean, he'll need his broken fingers set and to be checked over for internal bleeding and stuff.

i loved it. i about cried when todd woke up and saw the flowers.

O.O omg, im sitting on the edge of my seat {well bed] wanting more. omg, you are such a good writer O.O i feel for both of them, my heart wrenching it two as i picture todd crying and screaming. keep writing O.O good work

I can't wait till you post more D;

Ah... this is so good.

Yes, the context of it is painful to read and there are definitely improvements to be made, but overall, it is extremely well written with a very good plot. This has so much potential to be amazing; it already is.

I'm looking forward to reading more; as soon as I sign into my account (probably some point in the next few days), I plan on putting this on my alert list!

Even though this chapter is once again good, I do feel that you should work on your endings a bit more. It seems you're trying to leave cliff hangers, but I don't really feel they're working. For example with this chapter, you tell us the cliff hanger (Todd having cancer) a whole four lines before the end, which dims the effect.

When you use ellipses, there shouldn't be spaces before them (unless they're at the beginning of a sentence) of between them.

"q uavering" - There shouldn't be a space.

"I open and closed my mouth" - "open" should be 'opened'.

"broken to pieces." - The full stop should be outside the speech marks.

" Fuck, Todd" - There shouldn't be space.

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PS. Begging for reviews is probably why you're getting so few by the way. People are less likely to review if you beg.