This was a really powerful chapter that kept me glued to the screen throughout. Having the first chapter be the actual rape was a good move, as the sense of foreboding at the start of this one set up the rest of the chapter really well.

Apart from a few typos, there's only one problem I can really see. If you're hit in the back of the head by a metal rod, you're most likely going to pass out, not just fall down.

"fag, too." Christian" - The full stop should be a comma.

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to Random reader,

It's about half way through at this point (inside source) ;)

And it's extremely depressing, unfortunately it's so vivid and life-like that it hits harder. I would love to continue reading, I just don't know how much more sadness I can endure for Todd, or Reggie. But please post son

Okay so I read all of this in one day and I cried like the entire time. Its so sad but amazing at the same time. Is this the end of the story? Because I'd be so bummed if it was. Just putting that out there.

Damn... Amazing chapter, as always.

Made me cry. I understand Reggie's situation oh too well.

-Sigh- Anyways, great chapter. Please continue.

Update soon.

-Anna-

O.o Chapter 13 is posted twice. Strange, but oh well. It was so sad! I am absolutely in love with this story. You have such a powerful form of writing and I desperately wish I had your talent. Please up date again soon.

omg, poor todd. poor reggie in a way. peer pressure is hard. but god! the guilt reggie must feel. poor them, i want to cry. you an amazing writer, please keep writing. i wait anxiously for the next part

omg, im so scared for the kid. i know what its like to be hated for not being straight. poor todd T.T

omg. you had me at the edge of my seat. i cant wait

i LOVE this story, omg. i cant stop reading it. please dont stop . its AWESOME!

I swear, everytime you up-date a new chapter the story gets better and better. I'd have never guessed cancer, good job keeping the readers guessing. Cannot wait for another chapter! Post again soon, please

I think you could have made this chapter longer, but it might just because I love the story so much that I just want to keep reading.

Have at it!

Write more!

Don't be afraid to write long chapters!

I bet everyone else loves them.

I know I do. :)

I LOVE IT!

Please, please update soon!

DAMN!

Wow.

I was definitely not expecting that. Seriously dude.

I realyy really really love this story!

Please update soon. I can't wait!

-Anna-

This is story is very good. Okay, where to start? I almost HATE Reggie. I can't stand him. Poor Todd, the way they raped him and Reggie just stood there, the mofo. Yes, I can understand how he wants to fit in and not admit to anyone he feels something for Todd but Reggie is a coward. And to top it off, Todd has cancer! I know Todd loves Reggie to death but Reggie does not deserve his love (at least not yet). He was a virgin for goodness sake!I wish Todd had it in his character to ignore Reggie and fight back but I don't think he has it in him.

Even if Reggie does come around, that's not good enough, it too late, he stood by and watched him get brutally raped. Yes, he took him back to his apartment and as mad as I would be if I were Todd, I would be thankful the freaking monster I presumed to love didn't kill me like I thought. I hope you make Reggie go through something, if its nothing but heart renching guilt and being totally ignored by Todd. Todd has to get a back bone and be stronger. That may sound a little harsh but his raping alone should give him the strength and the fact that Reggie watched it happen should be amo enough. Great update!

What? He can't have cancer! Please tell me that this is going to have some joy and happiness for Todd, please! Update fast. I need to know what happens next.