|Reviews for Play in the Storms|
| thewhimsicalbard chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
This is a pretty powerful little piece. It isn't something that gives me an epiphany or anything, but it makes me wonder who your friend was.
That part kind of got me. I think you could have introduced us to your friend a little bit more, perhaps given us some more details about her (him?). That would have satisfied my curiosity a little bit; and, if you had placed it at the beginning, I would have been more attached to your friend when she "died" (in the poem).
This is a very good piece and a wonderful gift to your friend. Every time someone reads this poem, your friend lives on. I also hope that the little bit of concrit will help you become a better writer in the future!
Best of luck to you.