Reviews for Time
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I thougth of popping in.

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Hey, that's pretty insightful.

The 'but' added every two lines or so is giving me a negative feeling. I mean, the word adds a pretty negative and depressing meaning to the obviously hopeful statements.

It's like having a conflict inside of ourselves, fighting with ourselves to find good things in the time we spend but our selves keep pushing our efforts away with the "there's no use of doing anything at all" attitude.

I liked the intense meaning behind this, even if this probably wasn't your point exactly.