Wow, this chapter included a lot of emotions. I'm really getting hooked on this story. My friend read a previous story from you and I would read along with her sometimes and now I see that you've improved a lot. Not that you weren't good before because you were. Now you're like this ball of amazingness. Lol, that's not a word but let's pretend it is. Anyways, Kuro is an interesting character. And I'm definitely curious about the girl's name. Hopefully it'll be revealed in the next chapter?

Oh thank you! I have never had a chapter dedicated to me. I loved the chapter, and I cant believe she had been raped! I felt so bad for her :-( I hope you update soon, I love this story! Alexandra.

You are killing me! I need more of this amazing story! I want to know if he will "Mark" her or not. Please dont keep me waiting, Alexandra.

I like this story and when I get time I will read the rest but so far so good. keep writting, Alexandra.

First off, just going to say... I loved this story. Kintra is awesome; he's so kind and protective. It's cute. I love your imagination; you get the best characters. ]

again an amazing chapter also when I read your Author's Note I was very happy that you chose to use my name out of the other user's so thank you for that and I hope that your story continues to be just as well as this chapter was please update soon and keep up all the great work.

That was very sweet, especially for Kuro. ;)

Love this story, and how it's a prequel-type thing for Without Light.

Great writing, as always.

-Katie

75. UPDATE DAMMIT XD Can i request more sex? preferably with blood? and id like boy on boy too if you can do that.

pretty pleas?

Hey, sorry for not reviewing sooner! This is really good!

~Maybe she'd missed it while fantasizing about urination…~ I love that line!

You've done really well with the character interaction in this. I'm looking forward to more, and I'll read the next chapter as soon as I have time!

~NBG

I just love Kintra. He's so...yummy. x3 I can't wait to learn more about him!

Everything that was ever beautiful and true burst to life the moment her lips met his own.

Suddenly he understood everything; from the meaning of life to the reasons for the sky being so breathtakingly blue. The sun itself shone just for moments like this; birds sang and snowflakes danced. Everything, even the world itself must have been created for this and only this; the heat of her body, pressed flush against his own and the wet, rich decadence of her tongue in his mouth.

BEST LINES EVER! "now i wonder still...why is it that i read this already? there were 10 chapters i think?

I feel that it's true your saying and I'm with you all the way your story is top grade and I hope you continue this I feel so badly for those people I know afew aswell and I try to help them everytime I can since your are right our society is overly messed up but I can call myself a modern day gentle-man I wouldn't force myself on the person I love I would always wait for them to be ready and I know most guys arn't like me but yeah this comment is getting way off topic grate job and don't stop

I LOVED THIS!

Ah so much :)

And as per your author note, I would be just tickled to see more intense stuff! Like... More Kuro/Kintra action! Hahaha, I'm thinking THREESOME!

Bwahaha, my dirty mind screams for these things. XD

Excellent job!

nice! I don't really like reading fantasy but your story is so cool! I'm very intrigued. Update soon!

YOU WASTED A CHAPTER UPDATE ON THIS D:

I GOT SO EXCITED

A CURSE ON YOUR CATS!