Wowzers! I liked the commanders as well.

hmm gotta admit i'm not as sure about how much i like this one, not in the writing being bad or anything, as its well written, just I have a hard time with the "master" i guess...not a big fan of rape in stories...especially when i'm gonna guess she ends up liking the dude and whatnot...seems kinda of a hard to get past thing...but i shall still read and look forwards to each chappie but a part of me will always be hoping Kimari cuts off the "masters" dick...

So glad to see another story. Keep those chapters coming! :)

Interesting story can't wait to read more

What a cruel way ro lose! Keep writing!