OK, honeybun, IRREGARDLESS. Not a Word. Just clearin' that up.

whoever wrote this NEEDS to check when it should be "too" and when it should be "to" the mistakes are super confusing

Gosh that was beautiful! :) I literally can't stop my eyes from reading and my heart from getting all nervous and excited as to how things will go.

Found your story a few hours ago and CANNOT STOP READING! I have skipped all my schoolwork and the gym. You are a fantastic writer.

As I started to read the first chapter of this story, what I felt can only be compared to my experience with horror movies- captivated with utter terror. I knew what was coming but I just couldn't look away, when I saw it I felt sick and wanted to turn it off.

I did close the chapter down, I thought I cannot read this. However curiousity won over- I wanted to know how the story would progress, how it would end.

Instead, I felt more sick as I read along. Progress? There wasn't much. Just rape, more rape, then magically 'love' came about.. Where these feelings came from is beyond me..

What disturbs me the most are some of the reviews to this story- 'I loved it'.. What part did you love? The rape? The part where a rapist produces a child with his victim? The part where the victim becomes delusional and thinks she has developed feelings for said rapist asshole jerkface? If kimari decided to castrate him the first chance she got or atleast rip off a testicle then I would understand such a review, heck I would probably be posting such a review

It saddens me to know that a story like this- full of the degradation of a human being, could receive such positive reviews from anyone

This most definately is not a love story

Hurt/Comfort?

Is that another way of saying Hurt/Hurt/Hurt/Hurt/Hurt/Hurt/Brainwash/Pathetic?

LOVED IT! I spent a few days reading this. And finally i finished it. This was amazing. I really enjoyed it. :)!

Oh my I fell in love with this story. It was wonderful.

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I loved it

Simply disturbing

Wonderful.

I would've liked to see more wooing between Aragon and Kimari between when she was preggers and when she was birthing, but other than that this was splendidly written - I love the formal speak you use throughout and I envy you! I hope to be able to write like you somedays.

A good read so far, with far better detail than most stories on FP, but one thing bothers me. The time system you use to tell us the characters' ages is confusing. By 'seasons', you mean groups of four and not individual moon-cycle seasons, right? Nonetheless, this story is rather refreshing and well-done

I read this story in its entirety within 2 days and I've got to say that it's really captivating. It was a little explicit and at times I wanted to hit their heads for how dense they were being but still it was sweet and I liked how their relationship gradually progressed.

Amazing story.