okay, the story is way more graphic and non consensual than what i usually read, but i chose to read it and so i far i am happy with that decision. its the Hurt/Comfort that really drew me in. I want to see how the relationship b/w the 'Master' and Kimari develops. I like Ballan, and Nika might have a past but I still do not like her.

I really liked this story and was wondering if besides Commanders and its sequel will your mother have more stories that will be posted here.

Best,

Robin

So I like this story A LOT lol And I just had to tell you that your nickname for the baby made me laugh; my son's name is Kyle and his Daddy and I call him Ky, so that was definitely something cool for me to read :-) Anyways, back to the story LOL

amazing story :)

You know what? This story fucken sucks. Aragon is a bumb fucking raper. In a previous chapter he talked to Nika or whater her name is about being compassionate and how mean she was being and how Kima-whata is a fellow human being. Compassionate my ass. He friggin raped her and forced her to become his slave. What the fuck is wrong with him. I hate him so much I cried, and I only cry when I'm really mad. Aragon should die, or get all of his limbs ripped off then drowned in his own puke and tears. He's an asshole. Because of him I hate this story and will not continue to read it.

Aragon is going to die a slow and painful death I hope. Or this story would really suck. I don't care if he changes in the end cause that all measures up to what he was like in the beginning, and he was jackass who deserved to have his eyeballs ripped out with a rusty spoon. He's a fusked damn butthole. Well that's what I gotta say.

Sorry, don't think I could like Aragon after all that shit he did to everybody. He deserves to be castrated then have each of his tows cut off then die a slow and painful diarrea death. I'm a vengeful person.['_']. Well Aragon can kiss my ass if he thinks I'll forgive him. Well that's all I gotta say.

I like this :D I read another story of your mom's a while back (last year, I believe) and I must say that she has a creative mind! (: The pairing is completely different and something I am slowly coming to like. It took a while, but the story definitely did it's deed :D I really enjoy the story, the pairing and how different this is from the werewolves, vampires, etc., stories out there.

it's refreshing!

Tell her to keep up the good work! :D

Thank you for this story.

I was bored one night and just decided to go out of my norm of romance reading and found your story while searching. Let me say, it was a very interesting and greatly written piece. Not often do I review, but this story is one that I have to comment on.

Your plot was amazing. Having Kimari not submit to Aragan created just the right amount of spice and tension that was needed. Plus, when Aragan became aware of Kimari's pregnancy, the jealousy that he felt was something that was human and him going and punching the healer was relatable.

You had very human like characters that weren't just flat and there. They were emotional, fought the way that we would, and not to overbearing and right all the time. They flowed perfectly with each other, creating conflict and adding a flair.

The overall story was different than a normal read. You went out and actually showed something that not a lot of writers want to write about. Domination and submission as well as you added homosexuality in it as well. For this I do congratulate for.

Once again, thank you for posting this story.

wah...i love this midoan fic, can't describe heavy pressure reading it, I hope you could pursue your mom to made short sequel or oneshot for this 'midoan'...

great fic

This is really good:) nice job.

Peace and Love

~marie

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I'm hooked and I love how you manage to get the feeling of fear and longing through your words.

Absolutely wonderful story! The subtle changes in all of the vharacters was very well done each chapter till the very end. I loved to read this story! :)

This story is one of the best I've ever read, you guys should get it published or smth!

Hoping for a sequel to Midoans!