Reviews for Land of the Saints |
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![]() ![]() ![]() all your stories i love. i haven't been on fictionpress for awhile but i'm always excited to read yours. - ana :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could've sworn I put you on Author alert! Oh well, I came here soon enough didn't I? I can't wait to read more of this! DALTON'S EX? Can't believe Dalt's back, I remember reading the last name. I also like the title loads :D Can't wait to read more of this! ~Swati |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so incredibly happy that you updated your story! I absolutely cannot wait until the two characters interact more! && I also wanted to include that I've read two stories from the Mastersons series and I'm in love with your writing! The interactions between Fallon and River were enlightening to read! I'm currently reading this story along with the oneshot series, and let me tell you, I get so excited when you update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you be posting Keely's story after you're done with nanowrimo? I can't wait till she meets their parents. Its going to be fun! |
![]() ![]() All your stories deserve props. I've read most of them, fell in love with all of them that i have love, including this one. I love the characters personalities and so in conclusion, I just wanted to say, you should update quickly. (, |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a fun story to read. I like Peyton's attitude and I had no trouble imagining Kyler. I'm looking forward to more. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking this story so far! so this is set way before charity ever met dalton's family right? will keely ever find someone else?(she's so cheerful, its hard to believe she had an abortion) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta love the older brothers :D and, yay, they don't...completely hate each other anymore! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao, totally saw that one coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it :) I totally forgot that Keely was Dalton's girlfriend until you mentioned it in the author's note! This will be interesting, I can tell :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, this chapter reminded me of the scene from "Have You Met the Morgans" when SJP and Hugh Grant go to a mega store similar to BJs/Costco/Sam's Club for the first time! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, Keely is a trouble maker. I'm starting to like her more (I didn't really like her cause of Dalton & Charity's oneshot. But that's because I love that couple and she was kinda ruining things :) and I can't wait for her story! Not much else to say since it was a filler. (Loving the story, didn't notice and grammar errors etc.) So until next time :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh it took forever for fictionpress to finally let ne review this chapter! But I got it:D wonderful chapter. Who in the world has never heard of Wal-Mart? We practically live off of it! Lol(: can't wait for the next chapter! -brooke |
![]() ![]() ![]() Filler or not, it was still good. I can't wait for the party, haha~ :) Thanks for the update! |