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Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Typos:

"Dark against light, dim against brignt, (typo: bright)

stars twinkles (twinkle because of subject-verb agreement) the secrets before twilight."

the good part:

i didn't get what exactly this poem means until i've read it a couple of times more. i think what you're saying is no one is satisfied with what he/she is, and always fights/hates the people that have the thing he/she lacks.

I probably sound absurd but this is what the poem is telling 'me'.