|Reviews for immortality rate|
| Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I did find this a touch confusing at times, but over all I love the message and the layout and the style.
It's a great idea and a very honest approach to the journey of life, you've done a wonderful job of capturing the degrees of a relationship. Bravo.
| TheGoddessofFlame chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Skrew Grammar I have rights to say that I'm a poet. XD I love this and the no one never dies was very poetic and I liked the immortality rate. The title itself drew me in.