Fantastic work. It breathes and lives and beats with humour and love. Thank-you for sharing x

This dialogue is brilliant. You're a master at building tension, making it deflate, then slapping it back in our faces.

I've been bottling up some anger lately and this is the exact way I promised myself I'd stop talking but that I couldn't quit because screw life, right? This character takes away some of the internalized guilt. No, we don't have to be good people all the time, we can just b*tch and moan to ourselves if and when the need presents itself. So thank you for this.

How you can pack such complex, beautiful, well rounded characters and plot into eleven chapters when most people can't get it right in thirty, is mind boggling. Well done, this story will stay with me for a long while yet.

I really like your style of writing and dialog but this is where I stop as it obvious they are going to get back together. Hopefully you have other works. Thanks.

Because he's an idiot. Stalking indicates the mentally unbalanced feel their target is a possession. Sometimes when they can't have it they desire to destroy it. Stalkers should be immediately reported to police.

Better response, wished he had said over the phone instead of being manipulated into the meeting.

This is the point where violence would occur, if it was me.

Loved this story. It was perfect.

This is so fucking sad, it hurts. But it's beautiful too.

I absolutely adore the way this story is written, with those small meaningful inserted scenes from the past in between the chapters.

This chapter was so emotional. So well-written too. It was pretty intense.

I knew it :D I love how Lucas tried to erase every memory of their relationship, but still cares about Matt.

wonder if blue and grey are their eye colours or something...

This was so sad. Didn't expect it to end on such a sad note. But the writing was great. I can't believe English isn't your first language, you're brilliant at it.