Wonderful short story!

this was cute :)

really nice story-telling. you've got talent.

mind checking out my story, the come and go house ?

x's

aw! Cute!

Very cute story you've conjured up.

It was a bit of an unexpected ending, but hey keeps me on my toes.

It is nice to have the nice, cute guy get the girl.

I officially deem this story...a FAVOURITE!

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Sorry I took so long to review! This is a great story. The plots and characters are entirely believable. I enjoyed reading this. Keep on writing!

haha, well being the procrastionator (Spelling?) That I am this took me way to long to finally review. I am a horrable friend :( Anyway, I want to say that I love this story. It was funny and cute and sweet. The characters were all beleivable and loveable (even when they acted like douche bags lol) I love how well you are able to describe things from a first perso pioint of veiw because I know how hard describing places, or setting can be (at least for me) Not once did I get lost or confused, and even though you noticed all the little mistakes I was unable to notice one, which is probably because of my horrible spelling and grammer lol. So all in all you did a fantastic job, and I hope that you will continue to right storys that are as enjoyable as this one!

Lots of love, DN

p.s...see you thursday lol :)

aww i was liking daniel.

luke was cuter, but.. but..

i liked the progression, the language and callie way of talking.