|Reviews for New Student|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
["Lady, you're supposed to be teaching a class, to get students to learn, not brainwashing" Ethan wanted to say.]
*Lady, you're supposed to be teaching a class to get students to learn. not brainwashing, Ethan wanted to say.
You shouldn't pair italics with double quotes for thoughts because it just looks like emphasized dialogue.
[But the principle]
[What is she doing."]
You're putting unneeded commas in the dialogue. I don't think anime and manga are capitalized, like how we don't capitalize cartoon and graphic novel.
This should be edited a little. Otherwise, it's a strange but intriguing story.
| The Pretty Wallflower chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
That's funny, I'm watching Bleach as I read this.
Anyways, I like this, it's good, and I can totally see a teacher frowning upon manga and anime (not my English teacher; she actually made an assignment dedicated to drawing some panels inspired by manga _)... Is there going to be another chapter?