Reviews for Your Eyes Shine Violet
jenxrawr chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
this is beyond gorgeous.
dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Jagged-glass beautiful. Somewhat incoherent, but in the face of death, who expects rationality? It really adds to the moment.

In paragraph two, "immanent" should be "imminent".

I like your prose somewhat better than your poetry. The language you use is very poetic in that it gets to the point, but your writing appreciates the sound of words and not just their meaning. Great job!
Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
This was really moving for me. It's flawlessly written and much more emotionally charged than I'd expected. Well done.

- Koki
Louis Denair chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Quite an interesting experiment. Transforming a romantic encounter to the cosmic scale with all the big-bang(s) involved. Very well written too, and that's what makes it such a pleasure to read.
Lanayaj chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I don't really understand the romance genre of the story, but I love this piece. It's so dramatic. The language and grammar is awesome, and exceptional. It's so sad; I feel kind of depressed reading it, but it makes me all the more interested.

Lana
peechee keen chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I love it. :)