|Reviews for Dorms|
| Zach Ly chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
LOLOLOL "Eggs and boats make floating yokes" FTW! Nice.
Anyways,I loved the first chapter. Very foreshadow-y and.. epic. Who's Zeke? Don't tell me you changed the name to Zeke. Definitely no. I'd rather take Jason over Zeke. Maybe Rayou. Asian. Excellent beginning, be sure to add imagery and the metaphor stuff.
Nice job, 4.5/5 (LOL Zeke confusion)
(~5/5? First chapter? Dang)