Reviews for Goodbye
That For Which It Dreams chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
You're beautiful.

You've got words wrapped 'round your fingers. This is amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
A pretty piece you have here. Very depressing though. The author's note made me want to cry, probably because all the men that have died so far have done it for a lost cause. Being Canadian I feel like there's no end to this war, and the men volunteering themselves are either foolish or desperate; at least, that's the impression the media gives me, perhaps you could give me a different one.
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I also have family who were entangled in the war. War is a horrible, vicious thing. It's always hungry, eating away at our hearts and at our lives.

I hope all of your family made it back ok.

You may not remember me. You used to call me Alice.

See also: Wonderland. See also: Is Dying.

I really hope you're doing ok. If you ever want to talk, about anything (anything at all, not just things mentioned in this poem) please feel free to contact me.