|Reviews for Suffocate|
| t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Gods. I loved loved loved this. I'm going to read it again and again and again. The emotion is incredible, as is the wit.
Way to blow my mind.
| Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
what can i say to this? the tears on my face tell me how to feel about it. the wrenching of my heart tells me what i know about it. i can't say so here...because i'm not there. with you. what can i say, but that this will haunt me with sorrow and yet, it fills me with joy. a great poem written with great sadness. a bittersweet favorite to be sure. what shall i say to this? steady pen in my hand, i compose.
| neuxroses chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
The finality of the last stanza really makes this poem stand out. Haunting and memorable, like someone's last words. I really like it. :)