Reviews for Styx
valleyoffat chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
k fuck no this is the favorite.

the water, im obsessed wiyth water i love all the water parts

i will try not to attack every poem on here :)
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I love this. It's amazing.

and soon she knows her

limbs too will become the water;

become the water

until she can swallow herself whole.

Awesome lines.

c'est loups contre loups... french?

Brilliant stuff.
deefective chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Very nice. I loved the fluidity in this. I can say honestly, the whole thing flowed beautifully from beginning to end. Each part was in sync and they melted into each other quite nicely. I also liked the imagery. You used quite interesting adjectives in this, I noticed. Such as "subservient eyelashes". It's not a common observation but it's one that reveals a lot and it was placed cleverly. Also, if I'm not mistaken, there's a little internal rhyme going on. That could just be due to the flow but it really reads very nicely. My favorite stanza was the fourth. I loved the repetition of "stepping" and the allusion at the end. Though, I have to say my least favorite stanza was the one right after that. I don't know, it didn't click as well as the rest of this but I can't quite put my finger on why. Anyways, nicely done.