Reviews for Nerves
CarmenRosa chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Brosandi,

This was pretty good, but you should add to it. I like the details you put in the poem but you should'nt thrust the "I stand at your door" on your readers at the end. You should kind of ease into it. It was pretty good.

Sincerely,

CarmenRosa
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
That's cute, I like the way that you wrote it :D

It all sounded actually really painful.