Reviews for Haiku 1
idk chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
YEAH...WHAT?
Alix Cohen chapter 9 . 8/8/2010
"Ostentatiously:"

is it too long for haiku?

Obviously not.

Can the stars see us?

Maybe one has made a wish

On you, Alberic.
Alix Cohen chapter 8 . 8/8/2010
I love the stories

you tell about your cat! Makes

me wish I had one.
Alix Cohen chapter 7 . 8/8/2010
You crack yourself up?

My sister and I laughed too

As I read aloud.

Vampire ninjas? Yes...

after all, Princess Bride had

a pirate ninja.
Alix Cohen chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
Poor dove! That is the

saddest poem of yours that

I have read so far.
Alix Cohen chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
We are all mad here;

watch your cat vanish before

your very own eyes.

Why do we confess?

It's a play for sympathy;

I do it a lot.

You are not just You:

names are what we call ourselves

so You are not Me.

And they have power:

someone says to you, "hey, [name]!"

and you turn around.
Alix Cohen chapter 3 . 8/8/2010
It was a challenge

to write one hundred haiku

in all of a year?

Your world is too full

of great inspiration to

make it difficult.
Alix Cohen chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
Not only are you

in tune with nature, but

mythology too.

Maybe too arcane-

who do you expect to know

the names of the winds?

Blackbird on the fence

Red and yellow on each wing

Quoth you: "Nevermore."
Alix Cohen chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Maybe your cat thinks,

"If one of these pieces moves,

it becomes my lunch."

I see that you are

In touch with the outdoor world

The root of haiku.