Reviews for Laser tag my heart
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Acie chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
So much cuteness! But Molly made me sad
Somewhere Else chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
This is just so awesome. I can relate to your Deli and Zach because I also hate mush and whatever. I want to thank you for writing this piece of art. It's terrific. I love it. :)
Be-U-tiful chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
I loved this! Great writing :)
Mass Descent chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
:) I liked it
ToBreakMyFall chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
:O :)))))))))
heal me forever chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
awwwwwwwwwww nd BEAUTIFUL..! :) it touched my heart
evizyt chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
SO good. loved it. loved the background of the friendship and the ending, obviously.
dreeming chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I love how this end with Mario Kart haha. Mucho love!
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Whatsoever chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Aww cute story :3

I like how Zack is no nonsense and cant stand mush (:
ForeverInfinity chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I haven't played Mario Kart in like, two months. Three weeks is nothing. Man, I really want to go play it now. Too bad I don't actually own it. -sigh- Thanks for that.

Anyway, this was a great oneshot. It was quite funny at the beginning, followed by romantic and adorable in the middle, followed by funny at the end. Top notch, I say.

I liked how you somehow managed to keep Zach's aversion to sappiness in his character while still hooking the two main characters up at the end. It probably helped that it was just a oneshot and he was only in about a third of it, but still, nice job. ]
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