|Reviews for Heat|
| Mandisaurus-rex chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Is it bad that I laughed after reading the last sentence? xD
I really like the description you put into this. The character's emotion was really conveyed well ). And your choice of writing this in first person was brillaint.
The opening line really catches your attention and it makes you want to read it through to the end. But then, the irony of the last sentence ties it all together so well. I really loved it ! )