|Reviews for Twist of Daisy|
| hopey93 chapter 14 . 11/13/2011
hi I really love this cant stop reading! please write more :) maybe check out my work aswell?
| HeroofEnelios chapter 14 . 5/20/2011
Craaaaaaap. Well, there goes that. Andrew has officially been caught and now things are really looking bad. Not good at all. ...
Anyways, very awesome chapter with an intense ending. Well done!
| draco oblivion chapter 14 . 5/20/2011
Aaw Sheena's really sweet, I hope Andrew's being nice to her because it's the right thing to do and not just to manipulate her...
:O Andrew's been found out but I guess they can't really prove it unles he's stripped...
| HeroofEnelios chapter 13 . 4/15/2011
Wow. I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Andrew is really clever in this chapter, and I still love Sheena's character. :D
Awesome chapter, great job!
| draco oblivion chapter 13 . 4/15/2011
Andrew's really harsh...
A time traveller and space jumper... :O That was a cool way to link it to A princess summoning
| Victoria Stokes chapter 11 . 4/14/2011
oh my gosh it's been so long since i've read this story T_T but yay now i get to :D i'll review as i go.
Like a pixie who has just eaten a human's dream. - i dunno why, but this cracked me up. lol.
i like how she sat in the wrong thrown, just saying xD
i got too into it to keep saying what i liked. oops xD i feel bad for amelia. she has to deal with so much xD and andrew... haha he WOULD suggest starting a war just to get her back.
the face that launched a thousand ships? i think so. good job, choppy :D
| draco oblivion chapter 12 . 3/29/2011
Wow Amelia is really possessive and violent... she's kind of scary...
| Rahar Moonfire chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Aww. *hugs you* I'm so sorry that happened. I'm sorry for the lateness of this review too. I read this message when you first posted it but...things happened, life kicked me in the butt, etc and I forgot to leave a review. I think I sent you a PM, but I can't remember correctly so I'm reviewing just in case.
I certainly hope you repost this fic again soon. I also hope that copiers and fakes just up and leave. I's rather freustrating, more than frustrating, more like INFURIATING, when they steal and/or copy your stuff. I hope everything works out alright.
| Lillian Dooley chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I am truly disappointed to see this message. I was starting to really enjoy that story. Ah, well. I usually just post things on here and don't care who takes or reads them. They're often changed completely in a year or two. Besides, I find that writing someone else's ideas really don't give you satisfaction, so I hope the stealers realize that.
Don't forget the phrase "Great minds think alike". I've often gotten an idea, and when I go on fictionpress, there it is. It's frustrating, yes, but it helps me to know that some of my ideas are good enough that other people thought them good enough to turn into a story.
Don't take this situation the wrong way at all. Either the author happened to get the same idea, or she liked your story so much that she decided to make a variation, or she was indirectly influenced by your story.
Anyways. I'm a little disappointed, but that's okay. Writer before reader when it comes to situations like this.
| Quidefur chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I am truly sorry for what happened :( I hope everything turns out alright!
| HeroofEnelios chapter 11 . 3/3/2011
Amelia is slowly losing her cool and slowly the veil she's been holding up for Andrew seems to be coming undone which is not good for either of them. Wow. Great chapter and I'm looking forward to more!
| draco oblivion chapter 11 . 3/3/2011
Hehe yay that war will be interesting. :)
I wonder if anything would change if they found out the royal siblings had switched...
| Victoria Stokes chapter 10 . 2/28/2011
alright, i'm gonna review as i go again cause i'm procrastinating homework :D so sorry if it's random and jittery sounding.
She leaned in and wrapped her arms around Puck, her head against Puck's chest. - touchy. i don't know if you're aiming for this, but i'm imagining her as a seductress right now xD
i like how puck plays with the stuffed bunny haha :) he misses andrew it's kinda sad :/
"Don't you have a meeting with the king right now?" "It's fine. Andrew would have skipped," Amelia said. - hahahaha! i love the way you worded this. make me laugh :D
is puck crushing on andrew? O_O haha i really like puck :) he is so sweet i want to give him a hug!
ah, finished the chapter. i liked it :) amelia's kind of having an attitude though. guess she doesn't like andrew being away. the only critique i have is that you swithced to present tense a few times and it threw me off. and when they're in the library, i can't really picture the room. it's just kinda white in my mind with a few bookcases stacked around. other than that, i enjoyed it, and i like pucks and amelia's interactions. very different from how they interact with andrew. so well done choppy _
| Lillian Dooley chapter 10 . 2/24/2011
This is pretty good. It is well written, so that's not an issue. I just have a few personal issues.
I don't like Andrew. He gets on my nerves and I see no redeeming qualities in him. I really don't have any connections or ties with him whatsoever. He's foreign to me. Extremely. I was rather bored with the story until Amelia decided to feign the prince.
I also have a technical issue. I feel I do not know the prince enough to really understand this last chapter. I can't really follow what Amelia or Puck is saying because however much you tell me what he's like, I've never "seen" it. Even when you are describing his actions, it is almost telling and not showing. I almost feel as if his actions and emotions are thrust upon him, overplanned out ahead of time.
That may also be why he is unconnectable for me. He's almost unreal.
I still have an issue with how much Andrew is said to look like a girl. It bothers me. Like an itch I can't scratch.
Anyways, your quality is excellent. I haven't really found any issues with that.
Keep it up!
| HeroofEnelios chapter 10 . 2/23/2011
Aw, poor Amelia! She must really miss her brother. I feel a tad bit sorry for Puck but not too sorry. A great chapter, full of emotion. Excellent!