|Reviews for Mate of the Werewolf|
| matthew chapter 13 . 12/9/2013
dude i love this story and can you make another story and post it on facebook or yahoo and here is my yahoo email address :
and the reson i liked it was that im a werewolf
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I've only read ch1 so far and finding lots of sentences that are repeated, grammar errors, and poor or wrong word choices. Examples: calm her, her sexy body, her territory (calm should have been claim) in first sentence the word unwelcomed is past tense in an otherwise present tense description just "an unwelcome presence..."
| faith c chapter 13 . 11/26/2013
I loved it! It was sooo cute
| AwesomeMoreplese chapter 13 . 7/21/2013
So good love this story werewolf romance forever! You rock dude :D
| Carli Jean chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
So I decided to do a little reread of this story and... unfortunately it's not quite as good as I remember it being. If you were to edit it and maybe do a little bit of rewriting then it could really be something, but as it stands it's just a nice quick read.
There were a couple of places where you seemed to switch tenses and a few typos, but unless looked over by multiple people most stories have things like that. The writing in places was... blunt I guess. It didn't really pull me in and make me want to read more, and it sort of felt like you overused descriptors. (augh I'm so awful at trying to give constructive criticism, I don't know why I try)
But the story itself is still enjoyable.
I'm curious as to how your writing has improved since this story was published so I look forward to reading some of your other works.
| Soraya Zeeva chapter 13 . 4/29/2013
I really enjoyed this story. Thanks so much for writing it.
| Mythisea chapter 13 . 1/16/2013
I love rereading this story every so often 3 Such a cute couple! I also might be a bit biased since I love wolves and werewolf stories... This one's probably my favorite of your stories
| OfeliaWolf chapter 13 . 9/16/2012
I LOVE UR STORY XD
i hope there will be a sequel!
| vipera.422 chapter 13 . 9/7/2012
Though Ethan and Chance's mating might have seemed a bit rushed since they'd known each other for only a few hours, I suppose that's only natural considering they're basically made fo each other.
I didn't know how to feel about Camellia - on the one hand, she acted like a total bitch, but on the other hand, from what Chance said about werewolf twins it might not have been entirely her fault. I guess killing her off was the best choice.
I loved the story and think you should consider writing a sequel. I'd really like to get to know more members of Chance's pack and find out more about Reda.
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/6/2012
this story is awsome! keep writing
| GerardtheMoose chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
This was so good :) I not usually much into werewolves stories, but I loved this one 3
| Writerandreader chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
This is really good and I'm glad I stumbled upon it.
I just have one question. She had them all wrapped around her little finger and she could do whatever she wanted and could do whatever she wanted. When it says 'and she could do whatever she wanted and could do whatever she wanted', was that a typo or did it have a purpose? I'm just curious.
I have a story: s/2997743/1/bWinter_b_bWolf_b_bSave_b_bMe_b
Do you think you could read it and review it for me? I'm looking for more feedback on this story. Otherwise, I won't finish it. Thanks!
| Xhre chapter 13 . 12/14/2011
Thank you for writing this fic!
| AnimeFreak4Life chapter 13 . 11/25/2011
awesome i love this fic sequel sequel sequel sequel
| Mooisme chapter 13 . 8/11/2011
That was so good! I loved it! Wolves are a personal favorite of mine and I really liked how you portrayed them. *hugs*