Reviews for All's Dare in Love and Soccer
Teneombre chapter 35 . 7/22/2015

I finally reach the end (yesterday night in fact but who cares ? ). It's an interesting story. I can't make a review on the language use because English is not my language but it seems nice. have fun and thanks for this story.


Teneombre chapter 6 . 7/17/2015
"mom's sister's best friend's younger sister" You kill my exhausted brain. English is not my language and it took me 5 minutes to understand . By the way, this is a "still reading" review, see you at the end of your story (probably in some days ago).
See you soon


jam chapter 32 . 3/6/2015
That's not the proper use for ensconce.
BexMI13 chapter 36 . 3/25/2014
Hey! So I know you already said you wouldn't be making a sequel and I know I'm a little, but I just finished reading ADILAS a few weeks ago (yeah, unbelievable right?). It's kind of funny actually, I found out about TMOOTJG last year and saved it on my phone but never really got to finish it until a few weeks ago. So after reading TMOOTJG, I got hung over and since I couldn't find anything to read in FF, I decided to check if there's any other story I can read from you. And to my surprise, there's actually one with Erin and Tyler and it was written even before TMOOTJG and I was like: Oh my God, why did I not know about this.
So yeah, I really hope you'll consider making a sequel, or if not, one-shots of both Tyler and Erin,and Charley and Macon's story, like a Valentine's special or Christmas special (Although it's a little late), maybe? I really like Tyler and Erin's relationship and I'd really like to read more about them especially the part that were kept hidden to us in TMOOTJG. I scanned through TMOOTJG again to reread the Erin and Tyler parts, that I did not mind much before, and felt so stupid for not actually getting the hint that there's actually a story before this. I honestly thought they were just supporting characters that had a lot of history. *enter face palm*. I personally think that sequels are never better than the first one, but I really want to read more of Tyler and Erin. I just think that there's so much more to tell about Tyler and Erin's relationship that we got a glimpse of in TMOOTJG but they were never really told first hand. And I really want to know what was happening to them during those times they were fighting and how they were about to solve their problems. And don't even get me started on how curious I am about the deal Tyler made with Callum.
So yeah, I really hope you'll reconsider and I'm excited to read more from you. With the same amount of romance and humor, please!
xxSongBirdxx chapter 34 . 6/29/2013
Loved this cute fluffy story thanks for sharing ill also check out your other stories too
Guest chapter 36 . 5/8/2013
OMG, I'm SOOOO totally with you on the whole 'sequels about a couple who have already gotten together' bring boring thing! I mean they've already gotten together, there sooo obviously gonna staaay together, so why the heck would anyone write... Ooo-Kay looks like I've been ranting! Sorry about that :P anyways i promise I'll R&R ur next story...well that's about it so bah-bye!
vr chapter 36 . 4/13/2013
M.Suzanne chapter 36 . 4/2/2013
For some reason, my computer won't let me log into my account, but the name above is my username if for some reason you feel the need to respond - I just hate leaving anon reviews because I like to attach my name to everything that I do. That being said.

I loved the story - it was very light-hearted and cute and the characters were very fun. Your "heroine" in this story was very likable and while I have some concrit, it all boils down to the fact that I finished reading your story because you made me like your characters and I wanted them to have their happy ending!

You have already completed this story, so there really isn't anything that I can say or do that will change this actual story, but perhaps it can help you going forward with any other stories, or hey! If you ever want to go back and rewrite this one. Who knows?

First thing, I wish there had been a little more character development. For instance, I want to know more about the relationship between Erin and Evan. Obviously, they have a close relationship because their parents are always out of town, but how does that affect them as siblings? I don't see Evan's character as particularly over-protective (which is 100% fine) but I do notice that you touched a little upon him getting concerned when he first felt that she may be getting close to Tyler emotionally - specifically the line, "you're my business."

And what about the relationship between Tyler and Evan? You mentioned that Tyler had never been to the house - why is that? I would think that Tyler's mom would be enough of a deterant for him to want to keep everyone out of his house so I would think he would spend as much time elsewhere as possible. Or maybe they aren't the type of best friends to hang out outside of school because Tyler doesn't want to get attached to another "best friend" and lose him like Call.

Speaking of Call, I would have loved to see a little more of their relationship play out - some more drama between Call and Tyler. It would have been so awesome to see Call date Erin (not for revenge, Call is a nice guy and not intentionally an ass) but you know that once he realized that Tyler actually liked her, that he would want to get under his skin a little seeing as how in Call's mind, Tyler stole the girl that he loved away from him.

A little more self reflection on the part of Erin herself would have been good - especially when it came to the dares. I think Tyler hit the nail on the head when he said that she does the dares to overcompensate for the lack of attention from her parents. I would have liked to seen that explored a little more.

And while this isn't anything against the story you did write, but I do think you missed an amazing opportunity with Tyler's employment. Just think, he could have been secretly making her cupcakes and sweets as a secret admirer for months without her knowing where they were coming from!

The only thing that through me off completely were Tyler's parents. I get the role of Victoria - the over-bitchy, super controlling snob who only wants riches for her son and a booming business for herself, but if that were the case, then why did she marry a high school soccer coach? Did I miss something pivotal? Did they get divorced and you explained all this and I just missed it somehow? You probably did, but even so, I would have loved for that to come into play. Because if that's the case, I am pretty sure her mother threw a fit when SHE married a high school teacher lol.

I hope that my novel of a review didn't throw you off, I really did enjoy your story. LIke I said, it was very light-hearted and a fun, good read. I haven't read your spin-off story yet, but it is defintely on my to-do list. Keep up the good writing! :)

awsehujikoza chapter 15 . 2/25/2013
wow, this is really good. I would carry on but it's midnight and I have school tomorrow. Cant's wait to finish it.
awsehujikoza xxx
Tay chapter 19 . 10/21/2012
I literally started to cry, I was laughing so hard
Delilah Lillith chapter 7 . 10/19/2012
I'm so confused with you changing the grades. In the beginning she was fifteen then in the previous chapters she was seventeen and a junior, which made everything made sense. Now shes fifteen and a sophomore again. If she was fifteen she wouldn't be able to drive yet so she shouldn't have a car yet, and if Tyler went from being a senior to a junior it doesn't explain why he's in her class anymore. I think if you wanted to change the ages she should have been a junior who can drive and he should be a senior about to go to college... Other than the confusion I like how this is coming along.
Draycono chapter 36 . 9/30/2012
I love this story 3 so much, that I ended up staying up all night just to finish reading it trying hard not to laugh though probably made me look like a creep cause i couldnt stop smiling and giggling throughout the whole story xD
PerfectlyImperfect36 chapter 34 . 9/18/2012
Absolutely loved it. :-)
Loralee Abercrombie chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
I really like this chapter. I think Erin's meeting with the player is darn near perfect. Great job!
Amber Ice Fox chapter 34 . 9/14/2012
I'm really glad I found your story! It was a great read :)
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