Reviews for Homewrecker for the Hospitalised
Rosey-Blue chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
I absolutely loooved this, wish it were longer story.
Be-U-tiful chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
This was so hilarious! Great job :)
fellintothemoon chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
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Melissa Thinks: This quirky story has actually been one of my favorites for a long time. "Homewrecker for the Hospitalised" is a unique one shot about a girl who volunteers at a hospital and through her work there she meets a rather annoying, but attractive, patient. The story is narrated the main character, Delia, who is honestly one of the strangest characters I've ever encountered (in a good way). All the dialogue is brilliantly funny without being over the top, as is the narration. The plot of the story, while a tiny bit unrealistic, is meant to be lighthearted and comedic - so this won't be something you'll have to become too invested in to enjoy.
my princess ending chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Relationships like these make me squeal. I love them so much because both of them are sarcastic and the bickering between them are so freaking adorable. To find a boy like this is my goal in life.

I really love the way you wrote their small exchanges that pushed Delia's buttons and soon, I fell in love with the thought of them. I really would've appreciated you writing more about Delia and Jacob when they're fully recovered and going out of dates and stuff.
hunter005 chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Haha this is awesome! I love Delia's quirky personality. Keep up the good work! (I am so adding this as a favourite!)
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
This is possibly one of the most amusing stories that I've read on here! Your dialogue is entertaining and your character's are amazing! I just love this story and can't even find words to describe it!
Elora Finch chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Absolutely A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. I was laughing so much in the beginning that my sides hurt terribly afterwards. You've got some amazing writing skills. I wasn't able to find any grammatical errors and boy, I love how you construct your sentences. I love the characters! They are so real and adorable. Especially Delia. I love the setting and I absolutely love the ending. Thank you for writing this. Thank you for publishing it. Thank you.
PenguinLover33 chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Love!
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
I love this story :D :D :D Looking forward to reading more of your work!
found.eventually chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
This is so good. So good that I... Yeah. So, this is so good.

No, really. I don't even have words for it. Everything was perfect, well done!
Minkaos chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I really loved your story. Very adorable and absolutely hilarious.
JFaith chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Haha, this one-shot made me laugh so much. XD I've worked in a hospital setting before, so there were tons of moments where I found myself nodding to myself because I've been in the same situation. The only thing that made me do a double-take was the time Jacob almost fell in the bathroom, or that time he fell on Delia. In hospitals, they make a very big deal out of patients falling, and incident reports have to be written. However, aside from that, I had no trouble letting go of reality for a bit and just enjoying the lovely (to the readers, maybe not to Delia, haha) predicament Delia got herself in. Awesome one-shot! I hope you continue to do more. :D
Whatsoever chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Oh this was such a cute story!

Loved it!

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theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Oh god. That was brilliant in every single way. BRAVO.
Be The Best chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Tee hee;)
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