Reviews for Deception
rose ash chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
interesting simply because of the fact that you put yourself in it...it uses specifics from your life yet is still general enough that others can probably connect to it.

keep it up,

ash

ps. don't say you don't care if people review or not, it can be off-putting, it might be true but it's not something you need to shove in the reader's face