|Reviews for Make Eveything Alright|
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Brilliant, brilliant. I loved it.
and I speak it now
like gospel, as if
might seize a hunger
driven aground from
the swollen basements
| Ayx chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I thought this piece was brilliant.
The progression from beginning to end was great.
I believe the intro is stronger it holds you
but the ending trails off. It's not as powerful
as the rest.
| Piptik chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
The title and description caught my eye.
I really liked this, though I got lost after
This was powerful none the less. I could really tell that you put a lot of emotion into it. Each stanza was the right length, the word choice was excellent, and I was very moved.
These are one of those poems that you can read again and again and never bore from it )