Reviews for Make Eveything Alright
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Brilliant, brilliant. I loved it.

and I speak it now

like gospel, as if

beautiful banishment

might seize a hunger

driven aground from

the swollen basements

of youth,

Love it.
Ayx chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I thought this piece was brilliant.

The progression from beginning to end was great.

I believe the intro is stronger it holds you

but the ending trails off. It's not as powerful

as the rest.
Piptik chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Hiya

The title and description caught my eye.

I really liked this, though I got lost after

"I became

a man"

This was powerful none the less. I could really tell that you put a lot of emotion into it. Each stanza was the right length, the word choice was excellent, and I was very moved.

These are one of those poems that you can read again and again and never bore from it )

Great job!

-Piptik