Reviews for In a Hot Tub Under the Moon
I. C. Kyeropas chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I did not see that coming... I was halfway through thinking that this piece was a detailed but shallow description of a relaxing night... I was so wrong. Great job!
TorgoTheWhite chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Wow the story was actually quite poetic despite its ridiculous premise. Very impressively written. Have you hottubbed in open before (sans the bikini, of course).
Alix Cohen chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Wow. I don't know what to say.

You created such

an elegant setting, and

then pulled the rug out

from under it. I love when

that's done well, and I really

empathize: don't we

all do crazy things when our

parents aren't home?

Part of us, they shouldn't see.