|Reviews for In a Hot Tub Under the Moon|
| philosophythemes chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I did not see that coming... I was halfway through thinking that this piece was a detailed but shallow description of a relaxing night... I was so wrong. Great job!
| TorgoTheWhite chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Wow the story was actually quite poetic despite its ridiculous premise. Very impressively written. Have you hottubbed in open before (sans the bikini, of course).
| Alix Cohen chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Wow. I don't know what to say.
You created such
an elegant setting, and
then pulled the rug out
from under it. I love when
that's done well, and I really
empathize: don't we
all do crazy things when our
parents aren't home?
Part of us, they shouldn't see.