|Reviews for Crumpling Paper is Cliche|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
I tend to like pieces about writing because I can relate to them and this is no exception. I really like the idea here of blaming the paper. I don't think I've seen that expressed before and it works really well here. I also liked the repetition in the first line of each stanza. The only thing I didn't like really was tee punctuation. Just ending it with a period seemed odd since it wasn't one long sentence.
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| lymli chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
this makes me think when people have no ideas. I like the verse 3