|Reviews for The Sun Told Me To Shine Today|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
"and pleas of wind the air grew great."... the phrasing here sounded really awkward... was it please of the wind? or of the air? Or how does that all fit? Is wind of the air one thing? I don't know it was confusing...
"and howled it's airy rage."... it is its, but I fee like since you're personifying Breeze you should make it either a he or a she...
I liked the piece. The nature imagery here was good and I loved the personification. It was really wonderful. I also liked the ending. Very uplifting.
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| Rhiime chapter 1 . 8/10/2010