Wow. Disturbing- she killed a fetus wtf?

Wow. I can't believe this story has ended in an innocent boy's death, but the ending feels kind of serene to me, like her pregnancy and the baby were all surreal and this was all just meant to be. You wrote an amazing story and I'm so sad that it's over but glad that they did get a happy ending. :) You deserve a round of applause! LOL :)

I've been reading this story for a while.. when I first started reading, only 10-or-somewhere-around-I-think chapters were out, so I've been waiting for the chapters to see what happened.. I love the story... you're an amazing writer xD

also, this last chapter made me connect with Laine in a way I never connected before.. dunno.. I felt closer to her xD I understand her...

great job! xD

and I'll be sure to read your other story too xD seems epic xD

AHHH you're a crazy brilliant author, you know that? I love how this story isn't stupidly typical and so different from the real world.

LOVED IT!

I love the way you paced this last chapter, explaining everything perfectly. I don't feel confused, because your writing is amazing and just lovely and wonderful to read, flowing very nicely. I can't wait to read more of your work. I love these characters now, and I'm going to miss them. But I'm happy knowing that everything worked out for the best.

Thank you!

This Tory is beautiful and you are very talented...appreciate all the hard work u put into this...thanks a lot! Oh and does anyone know what happened to the story called "hot topic sneezed on me" ? Main characters are Telle and Dakota...pls let me know...have a nice day!

I really don't know how to review this story. You have made everything subtle but understandable. You have made the story intriguing. It's like it is real. This story has every chance of happening in real life. Jace and Lanie are different in most of the aspects but they have love between them. Roseanne is a very hateful mother. She doesn't have a loving side. Jace is her son. Yet...she disgusted him. Roseanne, as a mother, is acting out of her league. This shows the different faces one mother could have. I'm not blaming any mothers. Its just that what you have written here could clearly happen. If this was written on a diary, and if someone reads it, they could easily mistake this a real story. You have planned the plot very well. Its like you already have this whole thing figured out from all the characters' point of view. You quoted the lines of a character as exactly as the person of the same characters would say. It's really great. You have a precious gift. Do not waste it.

You have a great career as a writer. If you want to do something else with your life, you surely can. But don't let your gift fade.

Update soon!

I'll try to be the first one to read. Thank you for the breathtaking story. UPDATE SOON! GooD LucK.

No, she has to report her! Roseanne's a sick bitch who won't stop! The baby is going to suffer next! She's not even remorseful!

Ahhhh! Please write more sooon :) Its sooo goood

This is really well written, it's amazing!

I can't wait to read more!

This story is very good. I'm a little confused between Roseanne, Jace, and Darren - have you fully explained it yet or am I having one of those moments? I think I kind of understand the situation but I'm not so sure - it's very subtle, however, you've done it well. Please tell me if I'm just being silly and missed something in the story! xD

Oh my actual goodness.

This. Is. Incredible!

You'd expect this to be really uncomfortable but the way you've written it has made it very easy to read.

I am in love with the characters, the plot... just the whole story, to be honest!

Please keep writing!

xxx

Holy shit. O.o that was intense! update soon please!

next chapter please! So good! how long is this story going to be?

...amazing...just...update soon..