Loving it! :D

Great story, I love it! :) You should update soon, I want to know what's going to happen! Keep it up!

(btw, Idk if you've read all the mortal instruments. personally, i haven't, but only because my friend is taking FOREVER to finish reading it so she can lend it to me. :D however, she did spoil it a bit for me... I hear that Jace and Clary aren't really related...they aren't siblings. so the only thing you pretty much have in common is the name Jace. and in the mortal instruments, Jace is like saying J-C really fast, while here it's short for Jason. :) just so you know)

Huh? I'm a little lost. How did Jace buying a bigger and better TV equate to him "buying rights" to bang Elena? Because it's those rights we're talking about, right?

AND..AND...This chapter seemed very summery (lol, i meant summary.) In the space of two chapters, Elena's been devirginised (which is fine), Roseanne finds out, Jace pysches her out and they win rights.

Run that by me, again?

i like your story is so good keep doing more lol oh and can you check out my story let me know what you think its my frist story its only about the character backgroung

Forgive me if I'm slow but how is it buying their own rights?

Unless you mean how they showed Roseanne they're not giving in to her little battle?

It's going to get worse isn't it? I guess now is the time to move out? But they don't have any money- crap. Oh dear.

Ohgosh. Okay the plot’s going really well, n I love how Elena n jace interact. BUT somehow the way u write makes the story kinda detached. OH! I know. U’ve been inserting elena’s reflections on the situations. This sets the mood such that Elena is telling us her story when it’s already over. Which makes it kinda detached n less personal.

argh! *GASP* they got busted! oh! write more, and i'll make you the best cookies in the whole world!

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Ur story is THAT good. no one has ever gotten my BEST cookies!

u should feel honoured

omfg! forking AMAZING story! at first, i thought you got the idea from the Mortal Instruments series, but then you said differently. loved it! you MUST update like, right away! and congrats on ur Dux of Psychology, Dux of English Studies and Duz of Modern History!

ur my new favourite author!

write more!

THIS IS AMAZING GET THIS PUBLISHED WRITE MORE I LOVE IT!

OMG does this mean they had sex in the toilet! how are u gonna resolves this?

Jeepers Creepers

Holy Smoley

They did it and it's about to get more complicated, isn't it? Oh dear.

Whoa,there. You made Jace's promise to stop drinking sound like the entire story depended on it. Was that meant to be a dramatic device, or did you actually mean it? Because alcholics make promises all the time, to only break them with the next drink they chug down.

It's why Alcholics Anonymous was invented :D :D

By the By: Congrats on graduating! Am so jealous cause I have a year and a bit to go. (Was meant to be next year, but you know me, failing everything)

Update soon! x

wow. that was amazing. i really love the ending bit about promises. it's not too long, yet it's long enough to drill ur point into my head. i think employing the short paragraphs worked very well. :)

wow...no really, wow! your talent at writing blows my mind...