Reviews for Maybe Some Day
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
That's very true

But when I hear a maybe, I wait for a while for the thing I was promised to come.

Then I give up and just forget it.

It's just another way of saying no, but it's much worse cuz it gives you hope for a time before you, on your own, get the message. Ouch.
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Yup the word maybe is one big lie!

Maybe we shall go to the beach today...

Maybe I'l give your phone back...

Maybe we shall go out bike riding...

"Maybe some day I might,

lead you out of here,

out of this dark pit,

like an angelic light."

Dark pit of unknown is more like it!

Great poem as ever!