|Reviews for Boyfriend|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Thanks for your review forever ago. Sorry it took me so long to return the favor.
"not quite in-like yet."... I didn't get the dash because if it was in love there wouldn't have been a dash
"in front seat rows."... in front row seats would make more sense I think
I liked the piece. I thought your descriptions were great. I also loved how you connected the current conversation to your past relationship. It flowed well into each other and wasn't confusing except in the beginning. I didn't get the writing back thing yet. It seemed to come out of nowhere. Like there should've been a bit more set up.
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| Emoness chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Nice. I love the cup theroy. I tried it once. Like yesterday or something. Harder then I thought.
| lymli chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
wow, I like this thought about love and impossible things. actually nothing's more impossible than being in love with.
| uio chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
The tenses are all outta whack. But if it's intentional, I'm too dense to see why.
| jeepers09 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This has a sweet sadness to it that's really touching. I liked it more than I expected, and as I sit here I like it more and more. :)