How r we going to read ths story further ?

I hope this one gets published. I really want to know what happens.

It kind of bothers me how much of a nice guy Kai really is. o-o At the beginning, I just wanted him to bend her over and-yeah, yeah. Well. But yeah, I just don't like their situation. And the older adults... oh my goodness, it's so bothersome! :[ I really like it though.

I'M ANNOYED. D: I don't like how his parents won't tell him when they've known since before his birth whilst his biological father has to even if he didn't know until recently! It makes me sad seeing what this is doing to Kai and Jessica.

My only real thought is that very, very few motorcyclists, if any, will ride a bike in the rain because it's too dangerous. When Kai mentions that it rains 300 days of the year and yet he still bought a motorcycle, it makes him seem like a newbie. Just thought you should know.

I'm very excited to see where this story goes. Can't wait to finish it!

This story is beautiful :)

I love how you and Charliej appreciate each others work. I've often thought that really getting into the world of fictionpress and talking to both your readers and other authors would be lovely :)

Your characters are wonderful, the amount of warmth you portray them to posses is definitely something! Although you do give them their fair share of heartache...

Thank you for sharing your stories!

Mmm. This was great. I loved the angst part of it because I knew it would all work out and it was really rather heartwarming to read it... Especially since I finished on valentines day. Lol. Congrats on the SKOW nominations... That's how i found this anyways. Lol. Although now I can't access the site to look at the others. It says account suspended when I go there to try to find other stories... Makes me sad. :( anyways congrats on your win or runner up or whatever. Either way it was an amazing story. :)

I just wanted to say I'm hooked on all of your stories! There's not much to fault. A few grammatical errors here and there but the storylines are brilliant, the flow of the story is fantastic and the suspense in them is awesome. Never stop writing :)

OMG. I have read LOADS of FF but this is the first FP I have read. And it's AMAZING. Seriously. Someone should make this into a movie.

This is such a unique take on the average one night stand story. I was quite surprised by it at first, but the unusual element brought a refreshing feel to what could have been a fairly normal occurrence. I soon got swept up in the controversial but beautiful romance. I fell in love with both Kai and Jessie. Their personalities meshed so well and their inner turmoil over the situation added that extra angst without it being too cliché and predictable.

Kai’s playful but quiet nature was literally every girl’s dream. He was swoon worthy but not in an overrated way. The problems you had him face were complicated but I enjoyed how he overcame and handled them. A definite hero in my eyes.

It was also nice to have a heroin who approached her troubles head-on. While I felt for Jessie I was proud by how she wasn’t afraid to be vulnerable, but also wasn’t afraid to be strong. I liked her in her weaker moments though, she was more open. It added realism to her character.

I actually loved reading some of the more heart wrenching scenes between Kai and Jessie. They were both so exposed and honest that it tugged at the heartstrings. It proved to me how much they truly loved each other, and how that love was literally tearing them apart. So sad but so brilliant.

I just can’t gush enough about this. I enjoyed everything about this story. The characters were perfectly written and the circumstances were engaging. This will be going down as one of my favourites.

So thank you for the wonderful few hours I spent with Kai and Jessie. And for the happy ending of course!

Dawnx

Okay, so I was majorly suffuring last night and decided I have to force myself to get over my Kellen obsession. Well, this morning I started reading this story, and though before I had only read a paragraph, now I kept going and I kid you not...within at least 5 - 10 paragraphs I had already forgotten about Kellen and was imagining this whole new story. This is actual proof of how amazing and captivating your writing is! I've read books by other authors and though I never get as obsessed as I did with Thoughtless and Effortless, I do daydream about the story for a while before I am able to begin a new book. You are the first author that has been able to change that. I just finished Effortless on the weekend, and its now tuesday...Usually I take about 2 or 3 weeks to daydream about a novel and every time I try to read a new one within those weeks I can't get into it. Thankyou so much for taking time to post your talent on here so people like me can experience it, and even learn from it. I definately aspire to be able to write like you someday. :)

I just wanted to tell you that you your stories are amazing and you are a very talented writer. I'm so glad I came across your work. I read Thoughtless, Effortless and I've just finished reading It's All Relative, which is my favorite so far. Consider me a huge fan of your work :)

I literally can't read ANYTHING anymore because my mind automatically goes back to thinking of Kellen Kyle. -_- I can never express to you how amazing that series is...and I'm praying that there will be more...hint hint...Anyways, I will eventually return to this story and read it, but for now it seems impossible. I read the first paragraph and right away started thinking: "I wish Kellen was in this". I dont mean it in an insulting way for this story, I've read your reviews to your other stories and everybody loves them, but for now I'm too hooked on Thoughtless and Effortless. Though, I'm sure once I somewhat recover from my Kellen addiction, I will become addicted to this story in the same way. Your writing is breathtaking and I wish I had a sliver of the talent you have. I hope one day you become a real published author, so I can buy all your hard cover books and even go to your signings :)

~Much love from Canada ! :D

You are really a talent writer I love this book a lots along with your other books. At the beginning I didn't like the idea of their relationship 'cousin' so when I just read up to this point and I stopped. But I come back after you completed whole story and read the end (I know I am cheating) I start to read it again and fall in love with it. I like the way you write Kai felling for her, it's so beautiful. Can wait for your future stories. Thank for sharing.