this whole storyline is AMAZING.

I really liked the twist you added into the normal cliche. It was really weird at times but I wanted them together so bad. This was a really well-written story, but I did get a little bored when you had really long paragraphs all grouped together. The chemistry between Kai and Jessie is amazing and you did a wonderful job of portraying it :)

Great story!

Great ending! I loved it...so sorry it took me awhile to read this chapter. It was worth the wait though. You're such a talented writer and this book was incredible. I loved the angsty side and of course the 3rd person which you did wonders with!

I'm a Hawaiian born & raised.. I just wanted to say that IF I ever found a Hawai'i boy that was actually like this.. I'd be pretty pissed if he ended up with a girl from Colorado. nothing racist.. it's just we put up with "local" boys who are pretty much taught to be strong, fighters, non emotional etc... it's our culture and how they are raised to be... Hawaiian boys are taught to be hard, there's no soft Hawaiian boys. If you're from the islands, well I'll just say that I've never met a Hawaiian boy that was like the character of Kai. For that reason alone, it was hard for me to believe the story. For that alone, IF there was a guy like Kai around, I'd be like "Hell no, do you know how many island boys I went through looking for a guy like you and you end up with some girl in Colorado?" *lol*

That was one epic story. I loved everything. Great work!

This and 'Thoughtless' are probably my favourite stories on FictionPress. I love the storylines and the angst is great to read! I hope you're planning to write more stories like these, because you will definitely have a reviewer in me :)

aw ... a cute ending to an emotional story.

I loved it!

I'm trying to be really understanding of Kai's mother and mason, but they seriously piss me off. I get the whole "true love" thing but the fact remains that Nathan is the one truly hurt in this whole situation. And even worse, they were all friends! They just disgust me. Yet, I am finally glad that Kai and Jessie can finally be together.

P.S. the title of this story is really clever, LOL.

- Alyssa

Cute! Such a sweet story. :) I love love loved this a lot, even though it's totally distracted me from studying for finals, haha. Man, now I really want to go back to Hawaii, haha. I wonder what Harmony and Aprils' reactions were to Jessie practically kicking them out. It's kind of sad that Kai has to give up his apartment though, seeing as it IS "the" apartment, and they haven't even christened it yet since the beginning. Haha. Honestly, I think there was a point where the story started to drag a bit. I guess from all their almost-slip ups but nothing actually happening. That was frustrating, haha.

And hilarious when they thought Grams actually died. LOL. I thought so too and was like wtf wtf. I guess something bad had to happen in the midst of everything else running so smoothly, but still. lol. I laughed out loud when she appeared, haha.

Kai is so charming. Him and Jessie fit really well together. I wonder what Missy's reaction was to them getting together though. lol. And it killed me to see Kai and April together. :( And I got really upset that even though Jessie was convinced that another girl would be a good thing for her and Kai, she wouldn't even agree to even consider a date with another guy. Wouldn't the psychology have been the same? Or the treatment? I suppose that would have just complicated things more, but still.

GAH. And their sex is super hot. Like goddamn from their first one night stand they were just off the wall hot and passionate. Yum. Haha. Great story, overall. Very sweet but also very passionate couple, which isn't that just the best of both worlds? Haha. Please keep writing!

- Alyssa

love this story

Great Story!

Had a blast reading it!

that amazing it made me horney

Aw :)

Even though I have followed this chapter by chapter I have just finished reading it again from the start and I love love love it :) It really is an amazing story, the love that can't be and all the heartache, then finally being able to be together...just so perfect! Hehe I am such a sucker for a happy ending :)

Kia and Jessie deserved to be happy, I am glad you gave them the chance to be. Oh and thank you for not killing off grams you did have me a little worried there for a minute.

I really love your writing and can't wait for the next 'Conversion' book to pop up...I am at the moment re-reading the first 2 to get myself ready. I do love the Adams family and am very excited to see where being parents takes them :)

Please keep writing

Hayls :) xx