Reviews for Mezzo My Lovely |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh! The story is gone! I came back to reread it and it isn't here. :( I really love Mezzo My Lovely and hope it will be back up soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow ur last chapter was amazing especialy the ending. I liked the church story more but this had a way better ending (since I tend to like happier endings :P) but great story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh thank god he came out because compared the church story they didnt and it drove me nuts and holy Christian mom is wacko |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this was hilarious:"I asked your grandma." No, Christian, that's not creepy at aww no Aaron why'd you resort to that :( lol I thought Christian would get jealous but im glad he didnt cuz then its be too early :P though I wouldnt mind if he did xD yes I know I'm bi polar sometimes xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww Christian you like Aaron :D lol when Aaaron woke him up by shouting paparazzi |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh I liked what Christian did but it hurt Aaron so then I felt bad for liking it xD And I'm glad Christian gave that speech to Jill because its true no one is perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww poor Aaron that day took such a toll on him that he surppressed his memories and now they're coming out I like the story so far :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok forget my first review for the last ch I was off xD After I figured out in this ch that the italics was not a song xD but actually the other character I went back an re read the prologue cuz like I said previously I was confused. Ok review for this ch: I really like it so far actually, you knoe characters like Aaron stories with characters like him) are always better because when you go to school and see someone similiar to these characters you think how bout if their hiding something or just want acceptance so I feel like when I read stories I've learned to view ppl differently :) heh I knew what pocky was because I've read manga and for a minute I thought oh no is Christian already going to be daring and eat the pocky (cuz in manga they kiss with pocky xD) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am reviewing this before I read, So I just finished your amazing but sad story this is church when I had to check out your other works. But you sorta depressed me (no worries I mean it lightly :P) and I was scared going into this one cuz well some authors like angst and always end on a bad note. But since I like your writings and messages in your stories I just had to give this a try no lets see where this takes me xD Review for the first ch: well I gotta say I was a little confused so I looked at ur previous reviews and I figured the italics were a song but so far so good lets see where this heads :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sound awesome so far, the first chapter isn't very long but it sounds fwa! I do love music-y fictions |
![]() ![]() ![]() but one thing! it's a piece of music, not a song... :) in my opinion only contempory (post 1945) music can be called songs... :P just nitpicking. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! that was awesome beyond words... thankyou so much for writing something so beautiful...i feel like i've known the characters for forever, even though i just found them today... you're an amazing writer, please, please, please for our sakes do some more! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my second time reading the story and it never gaets old! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! i enjoyed every bit of it. It twas extremely cute :) although i was honestly expecting some sort of confrontation with Patrick and his apparent infatuation with Aaron. besides that i loved it. once again great job! :D |
![]() ![]() Nice story! Maybe a bit too nice, I like bit more drama and excitemend, but for fluff it's Ok. |