Reviews for Mezzo My Lovely
Brandi Heir chapter 11 . 11/20/2010
hahaha, jill. been thinking about this since forever hasn't she?

loved it :)
Roland chapter 7 . 11/19/2010
I loved it so much until this chapter; way too soap opera-y for my taste... Still, maybe you can manage to pull it up from the ashes.
Rae Kitano chapter 10 . 11/19/2010
Great chapter.

I hope things start to get for both boys.

Rae.
Brandi Heir chapter 10 . 11/19/2010
aw, i like it. poor christian and aaron. life just screws with them
Brandi Heir chapter 9 . 11/2/2010
wow, intense :D

love the christian/aaron action that's going on. and loved the jill and aaron convo even though he cut himself about it.
Chasing Happiness chapter 9 . 11/1/2010
Aw Christians excuses for looking after Aaron are cute D

Good luck with NaNoWriMo i think i might give it a go this year.
Rae Kitano chapter 9 . 10/31/2010
Great chapter.

I'm very pleased things worked out for Aaron. He deserves good things.

Good luck with NaNoWriMo

Rae.

(if you get this review twice it's because when I went to submit feedback my PC crashed)
hexyz chapter 9 . 10/31/2010
I kind of expected somebody to freak out that he was cutting himself yet they treated it like it was a normal wound. However, since this is all in Aaron's POV, I will continue to imagine that Christian is having an internal freak out. The whole "it's for States" excuse is cute too. It will probably a while before he can actually tell Aaron that he likes him that way.

Thanks for the update and good luck with NaNoWriMo!
XeeWrites chapter 9 . 10/31/2010
Aww, this chapter was sweet. I loved the classroom scene!
hexyz chapter 8 . 10/27/2010
The whole meeting the family this at the beginning was kind of mild. I was kinda expecting more emotion from either Aaron or Ronald, especially Ronald. Maybe I'm judging him too quickly but I don't like him.

It will be interesting to see how you use the cutting as a springboard to other things like Aaron and Christian's relationship/friendship and just the whole mental instability thing as a whole. Jill's role will also be interesting because she was kinda bitchy there. But then again, I would be too if somebody interrupted the horizontal tango.
ObiWanJesus chapter 8 . 10/24/2010
Seems pretty harsh to lay all that blame and responsibility on Jill. Girl needs to live some of her own life, and not just be a support.

Beast chapter and story. I look forward to the next installment.
Chasing Happiness chapter 8 . 10/24/2010
Oh my Christian is going to go nuts when and lets face it he is so going to find out that Aaron cut himself. I see a lot of intense drama coming up and i can't wait XD. I hope this review makes your muse happy x3 looking forward to the next update
XeeWrites chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Hey! Sorry, FP won't let you send emails through PM or review ;A;

I've got my email on my page now (forgot to add it earlier)

I'm glad you're interested! : D
Brandi Heir chapter 7 . 10/12/2010
coolio nicknames :)

loved the last line and how it just breaks off and you get this idea in your head that just makes you smile
XeeWrites chapter 7 . 10/12/2010
No, not a cliffie D;

I loved this chapter! It was great to see Roland and Aaron meet, and Christian's blunt 'madly in love' comment made me giggle.

I'm starting an MSN slash group - just a casual group for slash writers to talk about slash and stories and stuff. If you're interested, my email is on my page (just include a note saying who you are when you add me, lol).

Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm starting to like Christian more and more :D
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